tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post3449948200937394244..comments2024-03-26T19:52:25.909-04:00Comments on PT Dilloway: Episode 4: PlaguePT Dillowayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09394481476862013009noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-52865101880394259652012-11-06T14:22:19.759-05:002012-11-06T14:22:19.759-05:00Old Greetha is a master of disguise.Old Greetha is a master of disguise.Maurice Mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15338165486757095191noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-70899009406260192462012-11-06T14:16:29.796-05:002012-11-06T14:16:29.796-05:00This was a fun read. I like the back and forth bet...This was a fun read. I like the back and forth between Beaux and the apprentice. Elise Fallsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14734537117333738468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-64718241079165845132012-11-06T13:32:50.172-05:002012-11-06T13:32:50.172-05:00Please tell me that you got out to vote today. It&...Please tell me that you got out to vote today. It's so important.<br /><br />And I didn't like this line: Merlin is on his knees to study some leaves.<br /><br />I wanted to say, "You're a poet and you don't know it!"<br />Not disparaging your writing. I love this story, especially how you've mastered present tense. I tend to write in past tense. This reads very refreshing.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-56231776070572646112012-11-06T12:08:16.550-05:002012-11-06T12:08:16.550-05:00I'm really enjoying this story. Great cliffhan...I'm really enjoying this story. Great cliffhanger ending.stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.com