tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post5675508153955811472..comments2024-03-26T19:52:25.909-04:00Comments on PT Dilloway: Robinsons: The First Family of RampartPT Dillowayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09394481476862013009noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-50456343829211668422012-04-20T14:48:37.932-04:002012-04-20T14:48:37.932-04:00You are creating a very convincing world in which ...You are creating a very convincing world in which to place your characters.stephen Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17659054447637207734noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-42313005439873284742012-04-20T11:05:26.751-04:002012-04-20T11:05:26.751-04:00I could do that except this is mostly one of those...I could do that except this is mostly one of those BS posts. In the story the only mention of any of this is Emma goes to get a dress from Mrs. Chiostro, who gives her one of Clarissa Robinson's that she made back in the '30s or something, because Mrs. C is a witch and lived for 512 years, and it's mentioned how Clarissa was a big style trendsetter back in her day.PT Dillowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09394481476862013009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-57729157678920302722012-04-20T10:54:54.105-04:002012-04-20T10:54:54.105-04:00I think you should use the word "Dynasty"...I think you should use the word "Dynasty" instead of "Family". This kind of "Family" reminds me of the DuPonts or the Vanderbilts or the Kennedy's. These kinds of powerful families usually have a strong political connection too. I think rather than have President Taft "attend" an event it should be that someone in the past "was" a president or at least a presidential candidate. In the least, there should be members who are senators or congressman or judges. And when you say factories...what kind of factories? I think you should go with oil.Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-15655454027831777002012-04-20T09:47:43.732-04:002012-04-20T09:47:43.732-04:00That's just a wink to Mr. Pagel.That's just a wink to Mr. Pagel.PT Dillowayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09394481476862013009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3651058317830668643.post-68526480517458703082012-04-20T09:40:30.509-04:002012-04-20T09:40:30.509-04:00President Taft again. He gets mentioned more than ...President Taft again. He gets mentioned more than Lincoln in fiction nowadays.Rusty Carlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09887821877521181811noreply@blogger.com