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This one is a little better than last week. A little more action-packed at any rate.
She didn’t actually call for an ambulance, not having the time. She did the next best thing by grabbing an usher by the front of his shirt.
Who and why? You'll just have to use your imagination.
Tomorrow is another Insecure Writer's Group post...
5 comments:
This snip from your story really makes my imagination soar. Can't help but wonder what's going on.
Grabbing shirts is always dramatic. I'm sold.
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I know what happened. She's at an opera with her date and needs to go get dressed to face the evil Black Dragoon! So exciting.
I learned something today. I learned that in a pinch, either an ambulance or an usher will do. Lesson noted.
I was a bit skeptical of this category of entry when you first announced it but I have to say, I think it's working: I'm intrigued. Plus, I now get to imagine that what happened NEXT in this snippet was sexy-times. *I CALL DIBS ON THE FIRST EROTIC FAN FICTION BASED ON TALES OF SCARLET KNIGHT!*
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