For whatever reason I never got around to writing any sequels. Maybe because while the book sold some copies (and I gave away a bunch more) no one ever reviewed it. No one! It seems statistically impossible, but the closest I got is a couple of ratings on Goodreads. It certainly didn't make me feel like I needed to scramble to write anything.
At one point I did rough out some sequels. The first one would have Vinaya getting pregnant. For lack of anything better I call it Fat Chance. I mean, Pregnant Chance would sound weird. Expecting Chance? A New Chance? Yet Another Chance? Whatever. Here's my rough description:
It’s six months
after Vinaya joined CHANCE. She and Simon haven’t married yet but she’s a few
months pregnant. Thanks to the nanobots, she hardly has any symptoms at all. So
she can still go on dangerous missions—or at least she thinks so. But when
taking down a former CHANCE operative things go sour and Vinaya is nearly
killed. Simon and their boss force her to stand down until after the baby is
born.
After a couple of
months, though, that former operative she was after returns and badly injures
Simon. Vinaya refuses to stand by and wants to get revenge. Their computer
hacker turns up a lead to the former operative: he has a daughter in high
school. So with some help, Vinaya goes undercover as a high school senior—a
pregnant high school senior.
She does what she
can about hiding the pregnancy while seeking out the operative’s daughter. They
start to get buddy-buddy and Vinaya realizes the girl has no idea what her
father really does. It makes her wonder what she will have to tell her child
when the kid gets old enough. Maybe she will have to stop all this and work
behind a desk or something less dangerous.
Eventually she has
to tell the girl her secret to try and find her father. The girl isn’t happy
with her but she gives in eventually. Except when a team moves in on where the
guy is supposed to be, it’s a trap! The former drill sergeant is injured but
not killed.
Meanwhile, the
father comes for his daughter. Vinaya tries to stop him, but she can’t. She
manages to track them down and finally gets the guy to turn himself over to the
authorities and let his daughter go free.
As the father is
being taken into custody, Vinaya’s water breaks. She’s rushed to the hospital.
Not even the nanobots can make labor a breeze, but eventually she gives birth
to a daughter—a normal half-Indian/half-white daughter. Simon shows up while
she’s recovering to see them. And so they live happily ever after, right?
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It’s like 3 years
later and Vinaya and Simon are married with their daughter Gita (or whatever).
Vinaya has reluctantly stepped back from field work to avoid endangering her
life and her family. Mostly she’s just a consultant, though sometimes they do
need her unique set of skills.
She’s accompanying
her boss (and former girlfriend) to a conference in some foreign country. It
seems like a milk run, but after a night of some drinking and confessions,
Vinaya wakes up to find her boss disappeared. She doesn’t find any clues and
when the local cops start hassling her, she returns home.
When she gets
back, she receives a video of her boss being held captive and tortured. A
masked man demands Simon bring him all the information on the nanobots in 48
hours or he’ll kill her. Rather than risk Simon, Vinaya decides she’ll use the
nanobots to look like him and make the drop. The former drill sergeant and a
team will accompany her to the exchange. They get to some remote place in
Europe or Africa or whatever. As they’re making the exchange, Vinaya manages to
turn the tables on them and with her team get their boss back.
Except it was a
trick! During this exchange, the masked man took Simon and Gita. In a gloating
video he reveals himself to be some former rival from Vinaya’s con man days.
Vinaya returns
home, devastated to have lost her husband and daughter. Her boss comforts her
as best she can and promises they’ll get them back.
Vinaya visits her
hacker friend, who doesn’t have anything on where the guy might have gone.
Vinaya thinks about her former rival, trying to remember something she can use.
She remembers he used to hang out at a certain pub in London and that he has a
thing for Asian girls. So she changes herself into a young Asian girl and then
gets a flight to London.
She trolls the
pub, subtly finding out if the guy has been around. At the same time she’s
looking for any clues on where her family might be. After a couple of nights
the guy shows up and starts hitting on her. He offers to take her home and she
agrees.
Except it’s a
trap! He takes her instead to some warehouse, where he has Simon working on the
nanobots. But having the real thing should expedite things, right?
Except it’s a
trap! Vinaya was counting on him not really buying her act so she planned a
surprise for him. She’s able to rescue Simon but in the confusion the bad guy
is able to grab Gita. Vinaya tracks him down and there’s a standoff. Somehow
Vinaya manages to distract him enough to get Gita and take the guy out.
They go home and
Vinaya comforts her daughter. She decides to leave CHANCE at least temporarily
to keep Gita safe. Simon is torn because he doesn’t want to abandon his
research, but he eventually comes with her to ride off into the sunset.
Maybe someday I'll write the sequels. Or not. What do you think?
2 comments:
I like "New Chance" better than "Fat Chance" you don't want to get bad reviews from women offended that a pregnant person is fat, do you?
Since I probably won't ever write it, it doesn't really matter.
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