Here's my effort:
Hero: A Fable
As soon as he heard the first shot, Bob Silver sprung into
action. He had prepared for this moment
ever since Columbine. When he’d seen
the news reports about that, he’d sworn to himself no punks would get the drop
on him like that. That same day he’d
run to the gun shop to buy himself a Magnum, the kind of gun that could drop
someone in one shot, not like those pansy 9mms the clerk showed him.
For years he’d spent five nights a week at the range and
most of his Saturdays. By now he could
hit the target dead center six out of six times—blindfolded even. The Magnum had become as much a part of him
as his own fingers and toes.
Not all of his colleagues had felt the same way. The liberal tree-huggers had initially
petitioned the school board to prevent him from carrying the weapon on school
grounds. It couldn’t happen here, they
said. But one massacre after
another—Virginia Tech, Aurora, and finally Newtown—broke down their
resistance. And now they would finally
see how right he’d been all along.
He took the gun from its shoulder holster and then opened
the door. He heard a gunshot, followed
by screams. From the direction of both,
the shooter had to be near the library.
Twenty years as the vice-principal had allowed Bob to memorize the
school’s layout. He trotted away from
his office, towards the computer lab.
A frantic girl threw herself at him. He couldn’t understand what she said. “Don’t worry, sweetheart. I’ll take care of it.” He motioned for her to go out the back
doors. When she tried to cling to him,
he had to shove her away. “Go!”
He found the computer lab empty. He paused as he heard another shot. Bob hurried over to the door that connected the lab to the
library. He flattened himself against
the wall. He paused a moment to wipe
the sweat from his brow. Then he took a
few breaths to steady himself. Here we
go, he told himself. Time to show this
punk who’s boss.
He opened the door slowly with one hand. Then he peeked out the doorway. He heard only the whimper of another
girl. Don’t worry, he tried to tell her
telepathically, help is here. As he
thought this, he saw the punk emerge from behind a bookshelf. He wore a long black coat and a gas
mask. All Bob could tell about the punk
was he was tall and skinny. It wouldn’t
matter much longer.
He counted to three before he lunged through the
doorway. As he straightened, he found
the barrel of the punk’s AR-15 pointed right at him. Bob’s eyes fixed on the end of the barrel; it seemed close enough
to touch. The Magnum began to tremble
in Bob’s hand. He blinked sweat out of
his eyes. Then he felt his underwear
turn warm and damp.
The pistol slipped out of his grip. “P-p-please. D-don’t kill me,” Bob whimpered.
He closed his eyes, but he could still see the barrel of the assault
rifle in his vision.
A shot rang out. Bob
waited for the pain. He didn’t feel
anything. Had he already gone into
shock? Had he already died?
“Got him,” a man’s voice said. “Target is down. Repeat,
target is down.”
Bob felt a hand on his shoulder. The same man’s voice said, “It’s all right, sir. We got him.”
Bob opened his eyes and saw the punk sprawled on the
floor. A man similarly dressed in black
with a ski mask, goggles, and helmet obscuring his face stood over Bob. Bob got to his feet and threw himself at the
policeman. “Bless you, sir. Bless you.”
“Just doing our job, sir.”
Moral of the
story: gunfights are best left to
professionals.
“My wife has been killed by a machine which should never have come into the hands of any human being. It is called a firearm. It makes the blackest of all human wishes come true at once, at a distance: that something die. There is evil for you. We cannot get rid of mankind’s fleetingly wicked wishes. We can get rid of the machines that make them come true. I give you a holy word: DISARM.”Amen.
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8 comments:
Nice story. Here is mine.
http://dreamersperch.blogspot.com/2013/03/everyday-heroes-blog-fest-march-20-2013.html
Excellent excellent story. And probably likely to come true.
I'm glad to see that on the same day your antiviolence crusade kicks in, Congress decides that 'gun control' need not include 'automatic weapons.'
If you don't train yourself for the situation, mentally and physically, no amount of target practice is going to help against "cold feet." Glad you pointed that out in your story, P.T. :)
I love your story. Thanks for posting it. Maybe you'll get some conservative hate that will stir up drama. I'll have to check back.
Oh, bah! I still haven't had any ideas. Because it's hard to think of ideas when I'm in editing mode. I'll try to switch over and get something up today.
What a great story with a twist ending Pat! A lot of wish fulfillment there.
http://mouldwarp.blogspot.com/2013/03/everyday-hero-blogfest.html
I have to confess, I completely forgot, and my story is basically my riff on your story.
Dammit. I totally forgot and then went kinda incognito last week. Great story
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